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#1 Delusional

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Posted 15 January 2016 - 06:33

So the writing bug bit again.

Each day I build a better me
Becoming a women worth more then before
On the outside I appear so carefree
On the inside rages a brutal war
A pain I no longer try to flea
Because you can't escape loves core
It's like a mixed blossoming apple tree
With memories I adore and others like a bitter minotaur

What would you say if I told you
My biggest sin has become my redemption
What would you say if I told you
I spend my days seeking forgiveness
What would you say if I told you
Our relationship was that sin
What would you say if I told you
Each thought of you still breaks me
What would you say if I told you
Thoughts of us still make my chest tighten

Though my chest may still tighten at the thought
It doesn't mean I asking for you back
I'm not asking you to make this pain my afterthought
I'm not trying to get either of us to backtrack

What would you say if I told you
My biggest sin has become my redemption
I spend my days seeking forgiveness
Our relationship was that sin
Each thought of you still breaks me
Thoughts of us still make my chest tighten

Take peace in knowing I'm no longer distraught
That even though I fondly remember you
I've learned what those memories have taught
If you still hurt in time these memories will change for you too

What would you say if I told you
My biggest sin has become my redemption
What would you say if I told you
I spend my days seeking forgiveness
What would you say if I told you
Our relationship was that sin
What would you say if I told you
Each thought of you still breaks me
What would you say if I told you
Thoughts of us still make my chest tighten

Sometimes I think I'm over the past
That I no longer have a thought of you
Then one day they stream through me so fast
It doesn't hurt any less then the first time they swept through
I've stopped trying to block that lost loves broadcast
It's part of the life that allows new love to flow
My future has been built by my past
I don't know what will come with tomorrow

What would you say if I told you
Now I  it wasnt a sin requiring redemption
I dont spend my days seeking forgiveness
Our relationship was a sin
And even though
Each thought of you still breaks me
Thoughts of us still make my chest tighten
I am at peace with those memories

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Icy: I'll get with him

Lucifer: whoa now

Icy: Oh are we jealous?

Lucifer: yes I am totally


#2 TashiaSerene

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Posted 09 March 2016 - 10:13

Beautiful :)
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#3 Delusional

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Posted 09 March 2016 - 11:04

Thanks Tashi ^^=)

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Lucifer: whoa now

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